メールのオリジナル英訳
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Dear Michael,
Thank you１ for taking the time today.
I am sending you the details of the headquarters’ decision as attached.
If the budget is going to exceed the limits, please make sure to contact us.
We consider this project as a milestone for the US market and our expectation is quite high.
Best regards,
Takashi
Jennyさん発言
（出だしのお礼がとても丁寧なことについて）
It’s written with a lot of heart.
But the expression “Thank you for taking your precious time” at the very beginning feels a little bit heavy. It’s best to suggest getting to the main subject as soon as possible.
（”Please make sure という命令文を使うことについて）
Well, I think the tone is a little strong with the statement “make sure.” And depending on the recipient, they may feel some pressure, like it’s some kind of emergency.
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